 Resume, Does it look ok? |
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 Nov 5 2009, 10:19 PM
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New Member  Group: New Member Posts: 3 Joined: 18-October 09 Member No.: 20,477 Connection to/Interest in Ballet:Student  |
I am applying to the Lines Ballet BFA program with Dominican university and Lines Ballet asks for a resume. Is this one ok?
Thanks Olives (Name) (Email address) Home: DOB: Cell : Height: Adress: Weight Objective My objective is to become a student in the Lines Ballet/ Dominican University B.F.A program. Training The Dancers Advantage 11/2009 - present Instructor: Brian Bender Studying Ballet and Pointe Hannah Kahn 11/2009- present Instructor: Hannah Kahn Studying Modern Academy of Colorado Ballet 08/2008- 10/2009 Instructors: Michelle Dolighan-Rodeneck, Elizabeth Shipatsky Studied: Ballet, Pointe, Jazz, Lyrical, Modern Millers Dance Studio 01/2007-07/2008 Instructors: Leslie Henry, Nicole Miller Studied Ballet, Pointe Ballet Ariel 05/2005-12/2006 Instructors: Greg Gonzales, Patricia Renzetti, Ilena Norton Studied Ballet, Pointe, Floor Barre, acting for dancers Performance Experience The Nutcracker- Colorado Ballet, Ballet Ariel, Millers Dance • Roles: Harlequin Doll, Flower Corps, Lead Soldier, Russian variation, Party parent, The Little Mermaid- Millers dance • Roles: Flotsam/Jetsam, ocean Corps The Trial- Mark Leonard • Featured Dancer Spring Gala- Academy of Colorado Ballet, Ballet Ariel Millers Dance Studio Swan Lake 4 swans variation- Ballet Ariel Music Experience 3 Years of classical flute and Music theory Acting Experience East Theater Club -Weekly acting, physical comedy and stage combat workshops Mark Leonard Productions Awards Millers Dance Studio Ballet Award 2008 |
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Nov 5 2009, 10:26 PM
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Administrator Group: Administrators Posts: 21,107 Joined: 2-November 98 From: Georgia Member No.: 111 Connection to/Interest in Ballet:Teacher |
Olivia, it is fine except that it needs separation between the major sections. You have put them in bold, but there is no space between one category and another. Also, check your spelling on "address" . (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
I edited out your full name and email address just for safety purposes, since you posted on a YD forum. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) -------------------- Victoria Leigh
Administrator LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS... ...IT'S LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN! [Unknown] |
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Nov 5 2009, 10:31 PM
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New Member Group: New Member Posts: 22 Joined: 10-July 09 Member No.: 19,797 Connection to/Interest in Ballet:pre professional student |
Ms. Leigh,
I would love to have you view my resume and a cover letter I have done and let me know what you think, only I do not want to post it on the board. I have not made 30 posts yet so I am unable to send you a PM. Is there some other way I can do this? Thanks so much! |
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Nov 5 2009, 10:32 PM
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Administrator Group: Administrators Posts: 21,107 Joined: 2-November 98 From: Georgia Member No.: 111 Connection to/Interest in Ballet:Teacher |
Send it to Contact Us. That will come directly to me. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
-------------------- Victoria Leigh
Administrator LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS... ...IT'S LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN! [Unknown] |
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Nov 5 2009, 10:44 PM
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New Member Group: New Member Posts: 3 Joined: 18-October 09 Member No.: 20,477 Connection to/Interest in Ballet:Student |
Thank you so very much! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/clapping.gif)
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